Sunday, 13 March 2016

Popcorn writing

Popcorn writing
As I start to smell the delicious popcorn I get hungry. The popcorn was firing in and out of the machine like a cannon.It explodes like a  volcano and I see the the popcorn, it looks like a cloud. The popcorn is filling up the bowl. Then the noise stops and we pass the bowl around the class. The popcorn was hot it had a plain taste to it and was chewy but in a ‘yummy in my mouth’ good way. The taste of the popcorn is so good I wanted more, I imagine being in popcorn land.
















2 comments:

  1. Great use of your describing words Ollie. I can imagine a cannon of popcorn firing out like a big cloud. It makes me want to make some now!

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  2. Nice your describing the popcorn and you work hard great to describe the popcorn :)

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